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Hi:heart:
*havent been here in a while*

Yeah, *my drawing skills gotten worse,
and since I don NOT have colorpencils like I used to,
the my coloring skills gotten worse.
Amd yeah.
I need money for a scanner cause Im poor and the camera is crappy.

Oh....me
Yeah,
but I love it though.
*of yeah, if youre going to give me a critique, you have to tell me that youLOVE this drawing and explain how you like it, or else, I will report the critique as spam.*
Arletta-chan!~

P.S.

What should I name her????

Im thinking Marie, but I dunno, or Charity.

Critiques


:iconalatariel39:
Too bad that you don't have a scanner, because it would do your work more justice. But I can't hold that against ya!

I really enjoy this piece...You're awesome at your vibrant colours but this one is toned down and looks beautiful. The colours go well together and your colouring technique is great.

Her clothing is nice and...simple? I know there are some gathering, but it suits the character being so angelic. The shading is great.

I think her wings need a little work for where they are coming from...had to look hard to see when they come from her back...maybe should be a bit fuller near her back to show that a bit...I think if they were fuller, they'd look great.

I love her hair. I think it does wonders for the pic. Hides her face making her anonymous and mysterious...i like it! Plus the style is cute!

Overall it's a great piece of work!
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:iconspiritgoddesstamiko:
From what I can see this is a really beautiful piece. You have all the shading right, so I can tell where the light source is coming from. Which can be very hard some times. I also love how you use acrylic paint I'm assuming? The dress she is wearing is very nicely detailed and looks perfect. My favorite part of this picture is between the hair and the background. The hair flows perfectly and it looks simply beautiful. And the background just makes the girl stand out even more. You did excellent work.

The only thing I can think of that looks bad is the wing get way to small too fast, but it still looks great.

Awesome job on this.
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:icon2dextreem:
The way this picture is set up kind of reminds me of Rosalina from Super Mario Galaxy. Maybe you could name her Rosa?

It looks great by the way.

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:icondafunkydesigner:
This is a very nice picture.. The hair is beautifully done!

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:iconwuzzly:
Cute! I don't think you're style has gotten sloppier either ;D I think it looks awesome (like always :D)

I think Isabel would be a cool name xD

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:icongothiclolitagal:
I don't think you should bother savign up for a scanner, your art looks amazig enough without being scanned in~

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:iconneko-messa:
This is lovely! The folds on the dress are my fav and the background as well. Even though it's a camera shot it still looks good and you still see the shading so that's good.




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♥ Charly ♥
:iconate-my-soul:
Aw, you're too hard on yourself! I like your work; you have a lot of skill!

You're coloring technique is very beautiful. :heart:

Don't give up on yourself!

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:iconsilentmoon913:
I love the more somber pose and colors of this one. It's a nice change of pace from your usual upbeat and colorful work... Not that I don't love that too. ♥

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:iconpoporetto:
i like your coloring!! :) somewhat soft
:iconi-rainbow-starlight:
Thank you!~

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